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WHAT YOU GET | IN CONCLUSION
INT. WHAT YOU GET -
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Critique will include an analysis on character, dialogue and structure
-- and how to improve these three areas. I'll give you a one to
two page analysis on what is needed to improve your script and suggestions
on how to do this. I will also give you a page by page comment on
your script and again suggestions on how to improve the effectiveness
of your work. My intention is not to re-write your work with my
vision but to understand your vision and support that.
Price you pay depends on how much you want. All fees will be approved
by both of us before work begins. All fees are payable up front.
If for some reason you do not understand my notes and need further
discussion, YOU WILL NOT BE CHARGED FOR THE EXTRA TIME! My intention
is that you feel satisfied and the money well spent.
What is important to me is to give back what I have learned through
the years of working professionally in this difficult business.

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